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Thank you to everyone who came to visit me last weekend! TAYRYM, the fourth Galactic Defenders story, is now available!
Set-up: In last week's snippet, Tayrym and Guri said goodbye to their "family" and friends before leaving for Defender training. Now they are training and things aren't going as they'd planned. (Edited from original to fit.)
Tayrym reached out for Guri’s hand as they passed each other, Tayrym on his way to simulation training while Guri headed somewhere else. Probably to run the obstacle course. That brief interaction of whispered I love yous and his palm brushing along the sweaty palm of his boyfriend would likely be the only contact they’d have that day. Their time together on the carrier had passed far too quickly. Spending time making love and lying in bed while discussing their hopes for the future had quickly become rushing through courses and simulations when they’d reached Kalara, eating only darobars so they kept somewhat healthy. But not together. As soon as they’d reached the planet with their trans chips implanted behind their ears, they’d been split up, none of the newly-installed bunkhouses with more than one empty bed, and no one willing to move so he and Guri could be together. It wasn’t as if their trainers cared, either, reciting over and over, “Defenders don’t have time for the drama of a relationship.”
He didn’t believe that, well aware that Bryce had hooked up with Queen Lalia when he was still a Defender; and Jager and Katrina were part of the same squadron when they got together. He just had to wait, get through training, and then he’d be reunited with Guri.
Tayrym has dreamed of becoming a Galactic Defender since meeting the infamous Bryce when he was just a boy. Finally an adult and awaiting the day cycle he is set to leave for training, Tayrym learns his long-time crush shares his affections. Now, he’s unsure whether he wants to leave, which dream matters more.
With the threat of being sent away for his sexuality haunting him, Guri keeps his feelings for his former classmate to himself. Even with a new progressive ruler on Hemera, he still hides his attraction to the young man. But when he catches the other shadowing him, Guri decides to take a chance. The only problem is, the man of his desire is leaving the planet soon. Possibly forever.
With obstacle after obstacle in their path, will Tayrym and Guri ever have a chance to be happy together? Or are they destined to fulfill their dreams light years apart?
With the threat of being sent away for his sexuality haunting him, Guri keeps his feelings for his former classmate to himself. Even with a new progressive ruler on Hemera, he still hides his attraction to the young man. But when he catches the other shadowing him, Guri decides to take a chance. The only problem is, the man of his desire is leaving the planet soon. Possibly forever.
With obstacle after obstacle in their path, will Tayrym and Guri ever have a chance to be happy together? Or are they destined to fulfill their dreams light years apart?
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I wonder if he has a reason for his optimism or is it just wishful thinking?
ReplyDeleteHe personally knows of other Defenders who found love, so that is where his optimism comes from. But mostly it's just wishful thinking.
DeleteI have the awful feeling that something will prevent them from getting together. You wouldn't do that, would you?
ReplyDeleteThere's a happily ever after, but they're nowhere close to it as this point in the story.
DeleteAbsence can strengthen or weaken a relationship. Hoping for the former. But he does need to concentrate on his training.
ReplyDeleteIn this story, it does a bit of both.
DeleteI hope he's right about the reunion but he's probably putting too much hope into the belief it'll happen! Enjoyed the snippet...
ReplyDeleteThank you, Veronica! That he is. They both expected the best but never really thought about any other outcome.
DeleteYes, they'll be expected to put training first, personal wishes come a very poor second!
ReplyDeleteYes, unfortunately.
Delete"You're in the army now, son." They can do anything with them and send them any where. Probably he didn't think of that when he impulsively signed up.
ReplyDeleteTayrym knew what he was signing up for, but he didn't have a boyfriend when he signed up. That changed everything for him.
DeleteAww, I want them to stay together! :'(
ReplyDeleteIt's going to be a while before they're together again.
Deletecan i go with a cliche - absences makes the heart grow fonder - and writers are great at keeping lovers apart :-)
ReplyDeleteTweeted.
LOL Very true. Thank you, Daryl!
DeleteI bet they have a longer way to go than he hopes for, until they're together. Them's the protagonist blues!
ReplyDeleteYes, a very long time. And there is much that will happen in between to test their relationship and try to rip them apart. Cause I'm cruel like that. ;)
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