Hello and welcome to another Weekend Writing Warriors post!
Thank you to everyone who came to visit me last weekend! Edits for Tayrym have been completed. I also formatted and uploaded Tayrym for pre-order. The fourth Galactic Defenders story will release October 29.
Set-up: In last week's snippet, Gwenodyn was trying to figure out which guy Tayrym has a crush on. In this snippet, she's still trying to figure it out. Enjoy!
“And I doubt you’d go for the two shorter guys on the other team. They’re cute.” She bit her bottom lip. “Really cute. But, not your type.”
How did she know his type when he’d just told her he was attracted to guys? Though she was correct, so far.
“That leaves the best players on each team, the one with the strong cheekbones who looks like he’s dancing across the field or the younger guy on this side who is determined to win even down a player. He used to be in our class, sat behind you. I think it’s—”
How did she know his type when he’d just told her he was attracted to guys? Though she was correct, so far.
“That leaves the best players on each team, the one with the strong cheekbones who looks like he’s dancing across the field or the younger guy on this side who is determined to win even down a player. He used to be in our class, sat behind you. I think it’s—”
Tayrym has dreamed of becoming a Galactic Defender since meeting the infamous Bryce when he was just a boy. Finally an adult and awaiting the day cycle he is set to leave for training, Tayrym learns his long-time crush shares his affections. Now, he’s unsure whether he wants to leave, which dream matters more.
With the threat of being sent away for his sexuality haunting him, Guri keeps his feelings for his former classmate to himself. Even with a new progressive ruler on Hemera, he still hides his attraction to the young man. But when he catches the other shadowing him, Guri decides to take a chance. The only problem is, the man of his desire is leaving the planet soon. Possibly forever.
With obstacle after obstacle in their path, will Tayrym and Guri ever have a chance to be happy together? Or are they destined to fulfill their dreams light years apart?
With the threat of being sent away for his sexuality haunting him, Guri keeps his feelings for his former classmate to himself. Even with a new progressive ruler on Hemera, he still hides his attraction to the young man. But when he catches the other shadowing him, Guri decides to take a chance. The only problem is, the man of his desire is leaving the planet soon. Possibly forever.
With obstacle after obstacle in their path, will Tayrym and Guri ever have a chance to be happy together? Or are they destined to fulfill their dreams light years apart?
RELEASES OCTOBER 29, 2018
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Very interesting.A fine twist.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Charmaine!
DeleteShe seems to be exceptionally perceptive. Maybe she'll figure out his 'type' before he does.
ReplyDeleteWell, she has been friends with him for many years. Not only is she observant, she can also read his mind when he flings around his thoughts. She's known for a while who he's crushing on. She's just having fun with him right now.
DeleteAnd the winner is . . . stay tuned next week. Jessica, you tease!!
ReplyDeleteHehe. Her conclusion really is interrupted in the story. Perhaps by the guy Tayrym is crushing on. ;)
DeleteI hope he's ok with this mental fishing expedition of hers...but obviously they are old friends, well done snippet!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Veronica! Yes, he is okay with this, yet is not okay with what she does to him later in this scene. 😉
DeleteFun way to introduce the crush. I hope we get to find out who it is next week!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Alexis! I hope so, too. Depends on sentance count. Though I'll try to make it fit. 👍
DeleteI like the way you leave this hanging in the air!
ReplyDeleteLOL It's not the only thing in the air at this point in the scene. 😉
DeleteShe knows him better than he thinks. :)
ReplyDeleteYes, she does. 😀
DeleteEveryone has a type! I wonder what interrupted them... :D
ReplyDeleteThat's right. Will be revealed next weekend. 😉
DeleteFriends. Sometimes the teasing can be pretty painful. She's messing with him pretty well right now!
ReplyDeleteI missed the sign-up, but here's my WeWriWa post
She is, but she knows it will all work out in the end. She knows him well, and what she has to do to make him happy regardless of how he may perceive it while it's happening.
DeleteI'm sure she knew his inclination long before he told her. So she'd realize who he'd be attracted to. Good snippet.
ReplyDeleteThanks for visiting even though I forgot to sign up this week.
Thank you, Diane! Yes, she has known for a long time. She sees things that her best friends doesn't think she notices. And she's not the only one who has noticed, either.
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