Hello and welcome to another Weekend Writing Warriors post!
Thank you to all those who visited last weekend! This weekend, I'm sharing the first snippet from VAWN, the first book in my Sci-Fi MPreg MM Romance series, KADDIM BROTHERS. I've finished the story, and am in the process of editing it, so any feedback would be helpful.
Set-up: This is from the beginning of the story. Enjoy!
Shit, I almost forgot my suppressants! I lunged toward my nightstand and grabbed them out of my top drawer then tossed the package into my travel case. Going into heat was the last thing I needed to do around a bunch of horny space racers. While I was going to the ‘Family and Friends’ weekend event to visit my brothers, I wasn’t going to say no to a hot space racer looking for a good time. It had been so long since I’d had any of that kind of fun.
“Daddy, are you gonna fwy in one of dese?” Enif, my daughter, came racing into my room, flying the toy solo jet that my brothers had gifted her the first chance they’d had to see their niece. That was two years ago, for Enif’s first birthday. We hadn’t seen Genj and Ret since then, at least not in person. Only on screen. So, I was excited for this opportunity.
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This sounds like a fully thought out world you've created.ReplyDelete
Thank you, Ed! I've had this one in the back of my mind for a while, fleshing it out before I sat down to write anything.Delete
Great set up. The world is already starting to take shape.ReplyDelete
Thank you, Shari!Delete
From the beginning this character is definitely different than any of your others in this series. I love the wide variety of characters you've created!ReplyDelete
Thank you, Jenna! This is a new series though. It's sci-fi instead of paranormal. No shifters, but many beings from all over the universe.Delete
I agree with the other commenters - you've got an interesting set up here and the characters drew me in. Great snippet!ReplyDelete
Thanks so much, Veronica!Delete
Great job of pulling us directly into Vawn's world. And what an interesting world it is!ReplyDelete
Thanks so much, Alexis!Delete
I like this guy. Seems like a good dad, along with being a regular guy. Nice intro.ReplyDelete
Thank you, Diane! That, he is.Delete
Nice set up.ReplyDelete
Have to agree with the others intriguing set up. Love to know more.ReplyDelete
Thank you, Karen!Delete
You know kids will steal every scene, right?ReplyDelete
Oh, yes! Enif is the center of every scene she is in.Delete
I agree, great start to your worldbuilding!ReplyDelete